Writing for Understanding Instruction
Teacher Plan
Teacher: Patty Bartlett Class: 3rd Date: July, 24, 2009 Writing Genre: Report
ENDURING UNDERSTANDINGS / BIG IDEAS
Content: The natural environment meets the basic needs of the Native American Indians living in a particular region.
Report Writing
Focusing Question
How did Native Americans of the Northeast region use the environment to meet their basic needs?
Native Americans Indians of the Northeast region used land and animals to meet their basic needs.
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Building and Processing Working Knowledge
• vocabulary
• guided reading
• text mapping
• paraphrasing
• summarizing
• visualizing/
• imaging
• dramatizing
• oral processing / guided
conversation / think-pair-
share
• constructed response
• experience
• debating
• taking notes (graphic
organizers, T-charts, 2 column
notes, etc.
-Vocabulary – environment, long houses, wigwams, sash, breech cloth, moccosins, leggings, surviving, basic needs (Frayer model and visual images)
-Read Aloud (Texts about Native Americans of the Northeast as well as pieces written in first person)
-Group construction of the focus
-Work in partners reading from student resource center (located in the classroom) on Native Americans and taking notes. Also read from individual student Native American booklets
-Oral Processing: Discuss in small groups, the information that was obtained in partner groups
-Take Notes: Partnerships take notes as they read: Notes about how animals were used to survive will be taken on yellow post-it notes or yellow paper and notes about how the land was used to survive will be taken on blue post-it notes or blue paper. (Painted Essay: Yellow represents the proof paragraph 1 and blue represents proof paragraph 2.)
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Structures How will students know how to organize their ideas
and construct the piece of writing?
• teacher-written models
• teacher-and-student written models
• various types of templates or frames
(ex: Painted Essay)
-Teacher written models in the first person, written about something real in his/her life
-Teacher and Student written model: Written in the first person of a Native American child telling about what life was like, noting such things as games, schooling, responsibilities, traditions etc.
-Painted Essay: review report model with introduction, proof paragraphs and conclusion
-Painted Essay: Show models of reports written in first person, using the painted essay format (example: Penguins)
Lesson Sequence
What steps will I follow so that students are able to effectively
show their understanding in writing?
-Provide plenty of read aloud time to students from various resources using the Frayer model to introduce vocabulary. Provide many opportunities for discussion along the way.
-Introduce to the students that they will be writing a report about how Native Americans of the Northeast used the environment to survive and that they will be writing their report in first person (Define for them what first person means)
-Review with the class the Painted Essay format of writing a report, including the introduction (red), proof paragraph 1 (yellow), proof paragraph 2 (blue) and conclusion (green). Refer to the Painted Essay chart on the wall.
-Share student written models of first person reports such as Penguins.
-Introduce first person writing. Model how to write in the first person by writing about something real in your life and then write a report in the first person from the voice of a Native American child telling about what his/her life was like. (These steps may take place over a couple of days)
-Introduce focusing question.
-As a whole group, form the focus statement.
-Again, review what goes into the introduction of a report
-Students independently write the introduction in the first person.
-Students then share their introductions with a partner and revise as they see needed.
-Students then share their piece with the teacher. They may also share with the whole group if they so choose.
-Students work with a partner to read about the Northeast Native Americans, taking notes related to the focus statement as they proceed using colored paper or post it notes to reflect the Painted Essay.
-Whole Group – Partners share the information they found to support the focus. Public notes are taken.
-Writing – Students work independently to write the 2 proof paragraphs, conferencing with the teacher as needed.
-Remind students to edit for PODV (Punctuation, organization, details and voice). Check in with students in individual or small group conferences, as needed.
-Students partner share and proofread their piece.
-Whole class discussion about conclusion. Brainstorm the “So what” of the report. Reflect as a whole group, making short public notes.
-Students independently write their conclusions, getting support from the teacher as needed.
-Students share their reports with their classroom partner and perhaps a 2nd grade buddy.
Assessment: How are students doing? What are my next steps
as a teacher?
-Students self assess against a painted essay rubric
-Teacher assesses for content, first person voice, punctuation, organization, and details
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Next Steps: Gradual Release of Responsibility
Depending on the assessment the the teacher may do any of the following:
As students show understanding they can work more independently on the writing of a piece in terms of components, note-taking, conclusions, introductions, PODV, etc. (Note: Brainstorm and sharing discussions remain important)
Hi Patty,
ReplyDeleteGreat lesson plan! I really like how the focusing question ties so nicely into the overall theme of the Natives and their use and respect for the land.
It seems that you will be able to find enough evidence to support this central idea in the read alouds. The use of the read alouds coupled with the Resource Center you mentioned will be a way to make sure that the struggling students are accessing the curriculum, but will also leave enough room for the high achievers to be able to make more detailed connections.
The amount of pair-share work and sharing within the whole class is another good strategy for making sure that all learners are learning!
You have included some very concrete strategies such as the Frayer model for the vocabulary, complemented by visual images and the two-colored paper for notes. All of this is more evidence that all of your learners should be able to have enough information when it comes time to write.
I think the first person voice might be tricky for third graders, but it seems that this is a whole year project with plenty of oral processing, and therefore should be a great success! It would be fun to have the students "dress up" as their Native and read their piece!
I like how you use other pieces of student writing, like the Penguin piece to show the students various parts of the writing craft. Another good opportunity to reshare their work from earlier in the year to solidify those skills before writing a new piece.
I agree that the conclusion and the So what? of it all will be a challenge. The whole group approach and pair-share seems again like a good strategy to include all learners.
I like to share work with our Buddy class as you have indicated you will do with this piece. I think there is so much learning that goes on during these experiences.
Really great lesson sequence! I enjoyed reading it!
Kathy
I really like how you are using the first person to write a report. I think that style will get your students deeply involved in trying to answer your focusing question thus promoting enduring inderstanding of the big idea. It is refreshing to see that you are venturing away from the traditional style of report writing. One of the best pieces of report writing I have read is the eighth grade score-point 5 about a day in the life of an Egyptian woman. It is written in the first person and demonstrates a deep understanding on the part of the student. Great to see this style being taught in third grade!
ReplyDeleteIt's great how you and the stduents together will come up with the focusing statement. This is a skill with which students need lots of practice.
What will you do to assist the student who is not ready to the write the introduction to the report individually?
You have provided lots of opportunities for talking and sharing.
When you are teaching conclusions, do you have specific models for students? If you don't go the OWL website. Just google six traits and it comes up. There are some great models of conclusions.
Overall you lesson plan is very well thought out and should yield some great writing.